英语写作范例

以下是不同水平的写作范例。这些范例由真正的语言学习者撰写，可能包含错误。请参阅本页底部的 "写作部分提示"。

英语水平测试和资源

写作实例

第 1 级：新手-低级

在这个水平上，我能够创造出没有延伸意义的单个单词。

我可以分享一些简单的词汇，这些词汇与提示/任务/情境有关，但我往往很难将这些词汇联系起来以创造意义。

kids home and TV or play read. Favorite movie Moana.

第2 级：初级-中级

在这个级别，我开始发展通过语法连接单词来创造意义的能力。

具体来说，我可以将一些基本的主语和动词或动词和宾语联系起来，但我在做这些事情时可能会不连贯。

我的词汇量往往仅限于新手水平的话题，这些话题都是我在日常生活中遇到的，或者是我最近才学会的。

kids play home and watch TV or play games. read. play watch movies. watch jungle book

第3 级：初高中

在这个水平上，我可以用最基本的语法控制和准确性造出简单的句子。

我在回答问题时经常会出错，但同时我又能很好地控制刚学过或研究过的语言的一些非常简单的结构和功能。

在新手阶段，当我尝试造简单的句子时，错误是意料之中的。一般来说，我能够造出的句子都是非常基本和简单的，即使有，也很少添加细节。

kids play games. home I watch TV or play video games. I read books. Kids play Kids watch movies. Favorite movie is frozen.

4 级： | 中低级

在这个水平上，我能造出简单的句子，并增加一些细节；这样的句子有助于创造多样性。

在中低级阶段，通过使用介词短语、助动词用法以及一些副词和各种形容词来加强简单句的表达。

我一般都能造出独立的句子（观点），这些句子可以随意移动，而不会影响答题的整体意思。我的回答中仍有一些错误，但我能很好地控制较基本的句子。我对使用不同的结构和扩大词汇量更有信心了，在回答问题时也更敢于冒险了。

Some kids play games or hopskotch with other kids. Some kids stay at home and watch TV or play video games in family room. Lots of kids play Video games with friends. Kids play sports after scholl. Kids watch cartoons on satrday.

第 5 级： | 中级-中级

在这一水平上，我现在可以创造足够的语言来显示想法的组合。

我的思想松散地连接在一起，不能随意移动而不影响意义。

我还能造出一些复杂的句子，并能使用一些过渡词。 我还能使用简单现在时以外的时态，但在尝试使用其他时态时经常出错。

我的词汇量在不断扩大，我能够使用比通常、高频或最常见的词汇更多的词汇。我觉得我能够自己创造新的语言，并且在交流日常需求时不会遇到太多困难。

I have had many good things happen to me in my life. I have so many good memories. One that I feel is the best is playing golf. I played golf since I was 5 years old. My father and mother like to play golf since they were young. They taught me many things about golf. When I was in highschool for the first time, I played on the school team. We were very good. My coach taught me more things. I learned many thing that is important to me now. I learned to not get mad. Sometimes I would hit a bad ball and it would make me mad. I would play bad the rest of the round. My couch was a good teacher.

第6 级：中-高

在这个级别中，我对语言有很好的控制能力，对越来越多的话题也很有信心。

我的语言表达偶尔还会出现一些错误，但这并不妨碍我表达我需要分享的内容。

我可以使用绕口令来解释或描述我不知道具体词汇或结构的事物。我能理解和使用不同的时间框架，并且刚刚开始发展准确切换大多数时间框架的能力。我可以比较轻松地使用过渡词和概念。我的语言比较自然流畅，但仍会有一些不自然的停顿或犹豫。

One of the best experiences that I have had so far in my life was my trip to France for the student exchange. It has been memorable to see students whose way of life was different from Americans. During the trip, we visited multiple historical sites and museums and restaurants and city shops. The most amazing part was being with a exchange student at their house and living the life they would. Food is a big part of the trip to France, but there was so much more as well. I still think of the fact that our home country is often seen as the one and only. However, the trip to a European country where everything is different has proved people wrong. I know this experience will be one that I will remember forever.

第 7 级：高级-低级

在这一级别中，我的答复包含一些复杂的问题，准确度较高。

这样的语言能让我更完整、更有深度地阐述提示的每个方面。

我能够自信地使用高级词汇或高级术语、连接词等。我觉得我可以使用尽可能多的细节和描述性语言来创造自然流畅的语句，从而形成清晰的画面。但仍有可能出现结构复杂的错误。我切换时间框架的能力开始提高。

I think one of the worst, and best things to happen to me was my concussion. The date was January 4th, 2016. It was the first day back to school from winter break, and I didn't want to get out of bed. I quietly went downstairs and made myself some peanut butter toast in the dark, I felt too lazy to cross the room and turn on the light. I needed to get some schoolwork resting on my bed so I could put it in my bookbag. I tiptoed up the stairs and entered my room. I grabbed my school supplies and with my arms completely full I went down the stairs. I crossed the dark hallway, thinking about what assignments I needed to finish. I still hadn't turned on the light and that was the worst mistake I made that morning. I tripped over a broomstick that was laying on the floor. I couldn't use my arms to catch myself because they were full of schoolwork. I fell flat on my forehead. Felt the floor press into my head and aching pain. I don't remember much of what happened after that, but I eventually arrived at the doctor's office. This concussion lead to great depression and greif for me. I couldn't use technology. It hurt to move. I had almost constant headaches. I slept so much, almost 22 hours a day. But I eventually recovered, I pushed through. However, it permanantly destroyed some of my mental speed so I'm now slower at math and language than I used to be. Even when I got over the concussion, I still had a heavy, heavy depression to deal with. But I'm glad I went through all of that. Thinking back, it's something horrible, absolutely devistating that happened to me. But I can look back with a light, knowing that I'm strong enough to lay in bed feeling grim for so long , and still stand up again.

第8 级：高级-中级

在这个层面上，我的回答显示了我对语言的驾轻就熟。

我不仅能针对提示的每个方面做出答复，还能用简洁明了的语言深入探讨每个要点。

我能够在大部分答卷中较准确地使用一些较复杂的结构以及高级词汇和高级短语。

由于我在答辩中融入了各种模式和复杂性，我所创造的语言自然流畅。我的答卷显示出我有能力创造出语言技巧成熟、句法严密的语言。根据提示的要求，我准确切换时间框架的能力也很明显。

One of my best experiences in life happened when I was 18 years old. It was when I first began working as a cleaning lady at a conference center for a summer job. The summer after my freshman year of college, I was looking for a job, and unsure if I would find one. My brother told me about a previous place where he had worked, and told me that they were hiring for the summer. I decided to apply and hope for the best. I was soon in contact with the employers and soon had a job lined up. I however did not get the position I initially had hoped for. Instead, I received the job of a cleaning lady. I was going to be a housekeeper at a conference center for the summer. The summer was filled with many taxing events. I often had to deal with problems I had never before thought about as a hotel guest before. I made beds, I cleaned bathrooms, I washed windows, I vacuumed, and I did countless other odd jobs. It was during this time, though, that I realized just how capable I was. It was no uncommon occurrence to work six days a week instead of five, or to have an extra shift at the beginning or end of the day. I was constantly working, and yet I enjoyed myself. I took a lot of pride in my work, at least as much as a person who cleans can. I would push myself to not only clean better but to clean faster. Soon I was cleaning things in half the time it took others to clean. Regardless of this though, I was still surprised when I received employee of the month at only my second month at the job. This made me realize that my work was appreciated and, as I said before, that I was capable of much more than I had ever thought. So even though this was not the most glamorous experience, it has been my most rewarding. I learned the value of hard work and realized just how much I can do. Altogether, this has been an experience that has opened up a world of possibilities to me and for that reason, it is one of my best experiences.